Past days I have been estudying the use of conjuctions, therefore I made the following story using them and I will thank you if you help me correct, please. đ€
âSUN AND HER PLANETSâ
Once upon a time, a brilliant and extraordinary star, its name was Sun. Sun lived in a city called Milky Way and since millions of years ago, she took care about nine planets. Accordingly to history, she had a special place for each planet. Actually, the planets were very happy rotating around Sun; futher they had their own space to spin without any problem. Theyâre called family, likewise theyâre called Solar System.
Although they had been a family for millions year, they had never had a meeting, the reason was because Gravity controlled their lifes and she was very estrict. But, Gravity wasnât bad, she only followed the rules of Cosmos.
To be continued...