I'd love to help.

Guess who?

I am going to talk about a friend... This person is very outgoing, almost always arrives late to the school. My partner is brightside, very helpful and laid-back, he's very active because he plays soccer and volleyball, he plays very well.

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Estimado Sr. Rodríguez,

Hola, mi nombre es Jenna y soy una estudiante de Salud Pública. Le escribo porque estoy muy interesada en programas de nutricíon en La república Dominicana. Tengo la oportunidad de aplicar para un Fulbright grant para una investigación en nutrición y quiero preguntar si su organacíon está interesada en trabajar con estudiantes de Johns Hopkins. Con Fulbright, voy a tener dinero para mi investigación pero necesito un contacto. Por favor, me encantaría hablar con usted. Ví ¨Fortalecimiento Institucional para la Prevención y la Promoción de Salud en Embarazadas y el periodo Neonatal, Región III de Salud¨y creo que puedo ayudar.

A story

Today I read a story about a girl who surfed a lot. I really feel sad for her, she had a lot of problems. her family kicked her out her home. She suffered alone in the street without money or work or a home. She found herself pregnant with a baby from a man who just went away after doing that without mercy. 

She suffered before she could find a good job and a home for her and her daughter.  Then she finally met a good man and married him. After she discovered that her father died and her mother had cancer, she blamed herself; her brothers blamed her too. Her husband supported her, also her mother. 

She finally succeeded to talk with her brothers thanks to her husband who helped her. 
It was a true story for a really nice girl. 
The story has a lot of detail a lot of suffering and of course a lot of pain.

*** <em>Pretty good (: You should work a little more on the verbs and it's past tense, also, maybe try to be more careful with punctuation.</em> ***

My sister....

This is my sister, her name's Jane, she's 37 years old. She gets up at 6 o'clock, then she has breakfast, she eats bread and milk with coffee. After that, she goes to work; she's a psychologist. She often goes home at lunch time at 12 o'clock, then she gets back to work. She works until 18 o'clock.

In the evening she goes home and she has dinner, after that, she's relaxed <em>(or "she relaxes" maybe)</em> or she usually goes to the gym.

*** Very good! ***

My School Festival

Tomorrow, my school festival will be held!
I'm so looking forward to it.
Each class opens a store which they want to do.
One of classes will have ''shaved ice'', so, I want to try it!!
But, most of the stores are sold out at once, so the store will be sold out soon ( or "very quick" ) ;)
If I want to try it, I have to go to the store!
I hope my school festival will go well.

I'll enjoy the rest of my school festival.

<em>It sounds really fun! It even makes me wanna go hahaha. I hope you have a great time (:</em>