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I keep busy on the weenend because I almost have a part-time work. I can work only weekend so I always work on weekend! However, I like this work. Ofcourse I like workers who work together and the work description is also fulfilling. I often get involved with small children,so I was very happy!! I'm going to do my best at the same part-time job for the of my college life.
8 lug 2025 14:05
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I keep busy on the weekend because I have part-time work. I can work
only on weekends, so I always work on the weekend! However, I like this work. Of course I
like workers who work together and the work description is also fulfilling. I
often get involved with small children, so I was very happy!! I'm going to do my
best at the same part-time job for the rest of my college life.
Hi, great job with your writing! 🌟
▫️There are a lot of repeated words though. Try paraphrasing more.
For example:
Work/Job/Profession/Occupation/Employment
"Of course I like my colleagues, and the profession is fulfilling."
I also love working with kids!
- Teacher Dani 🌷
8 lug 2025 15:51
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