The AI does an adequate job of removing grammatical imperfections, but it has no skill (nor could it possibly have) at guessing what you want to say when your meaning is not clear. For that reason, it makes a lousy editor. A good editor needs to help you say well what you mean to say, not to help you correctly say something you did not mean to say. Instead of doing this, AI just makes guesses that may not correspond to your true intentions. AI's inability to read your mind causes it to change your meaning. For example, it changed "I am easier to develop relation with people" (which is poorly structured), into "has allowed me to develop relationships with people". A correction closer to your intent would have been "I relate more skillfully with people".

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