Wendy
WOULD YOU DO ME A FAVOR TO CORRECT THE SPEECH.THANKS Today, we come to this creative park filled with surprises. Jianyu Zhou, which just won the title of municipal cultural industrial Park. Looking down from the air by the Dongjiang River in Guancheng, this small island looks like a catfish, Therefore, it is called Jianyu zhou. It was once a pioneer in Dongguan's industrialization. However, in the past decade, it has fallen into silence. After the transformation, JianYu Zhou is divided into three areas, exhibition area, creative area and cultural area. Even powerful brands such as Alibaba, Kelly Moss Art Museum, and Bear Design have settled here. It's also a fashion spot. There have been many IP exhibitions held here. Young people all like to come here. Nowadays, with the continuous expansion of urban space and the encouraging development of cultural industries, Jianyu Zhou sends out new glory.
15 mar 2024 13:41
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WOULD YOU DO ME A FAVOR TO CORRECT THE SPEECH.THANKS Today, we come to this creative park filled with surprises. Jianyu Zhou, which has just won the title of (the best?) municipal cultural industrial park. Looking down from the air at the Dongjiang River in Guancheng, this small island looks like a catfish. Therefore, it is called Jianyu zhou. It was once a pioneer in Dongguan's industrialization. However, in the past decade, it had fallen into silence (or disuse). After the transformation, JianYu Zhou is now divided into three areas, an exhibition area, a creative area and a cultural area. Even powerful brands such as Alibaba, Kelly Moss Art Museum, and Bear Design have settled here. It's also a fashion spot. (How?) There have been many IP (internet protocol?, intellectual property?) exhibitions held here. Young people all like to come here. (Why?) Nowadays, with the continuous expansion of urban space (expansion of suburbs? How is this relevant?) and the encouraging development of cultural industries, Jianyu Zhou has achieved new glory.
This is mostly ok but you need to explain your assertions.
15 marzo 2024
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