"When you become a member, it will unlock so many perks including more videos like this."
In this sentence, should I say "you will unlock" instead of "it will unlock"? ChatGPT said "you will" is more natural and was wondering if that's correct.
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Risposte · 8
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"You" is indeed better but the reason is psychology, not language. "You can unlock" makes the customer feel more powerful. Wow! I can unlock something! I must be special.
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I prefer it will unlock, as it’s the system that unlocks the perks for you
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Either can be right, it depends on if you want the emphasis to be on the "you" doing the action of unlocking, or "it" (the system) doing the unlocking ☺️
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Because you used "you" in the first clause, it is more natural and more proper to also use "you" in the second clause.
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Becoming a member unlocks many perks including more videos like this one.
When you become a member, you will have access to many perks including more videos like this one.
Native speakers would say the other constructions, but they sound a bit ugly and imprecise.
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