People in my country celebrate their birthday with family and friends, can be with a party or just a simple meeting but it's very important sing "Happy birthday to you" and for us it's a very long song 🤣🇻🇪
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People in my country celebrate their birthday with family and friends, it can be at a party or just a simple meeting, but it’s very important to sing "Happy birthday to you", and for us, it’s a very long song 🤣🇻🇪
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People in my country celebrate their birthday with family and friends. The celebration can be a party or just a simple meeting but it's very important to sing "Happy Birthday to you" and for us it's a very long song 🤣🇻🇪
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