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Paulo Fonseca
I've been to Europe and had amazing opportunity to visit three beautiful countries: Spain, Portugal and France. The weather was very hot and the beaches full of people on holidays taking sun bath and doing sports. I love the energy and gladness that only the summer can bring to ordinary days. Phophets beach was the beach that I liked the most. It is really wonderful with clear waters and white and thin sand. As a runner I couldn't waste the opportunity to cover some kilometers in such beautiful place like that but due the high temperatures I was able to run only 5km daily sweating like worn off kettle 😅. I'm eternaly grateful and I don't get tired to say much obligate Lord for everything you have given to me.
25 lug 2022 09:48
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I've been to Europe and had an amazing opportunity to visit three beautiful
countries: Spain, Portugal and France. The weather was very hot and, on holidays, the beaches were full of people taking sun bath and doing sports. I love the energy
and gladness that only summer can bring to ordinary days. Phophets Beach was
the beach that I liked the most. It is really wonderful with clear waters and
white, thin sand. As a runner I couldn't waste the opportunity to cover some
kilometers in such beautiful place like that but due the high temperatures, I was only able to run 5km daily while sweating like a worn off kettle 😅. I'm eternally grateful and I don't get tired to say much thanks to the Lord for everything you have given to me.
Notes:
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3. I hope one day we can compete in a marathon at a beautiful beach :)
Best Regards,
Daffa
25 luglio 2022
I've been to Europe, and I had the amazing opportunity to visit three beautiful
countries: Spain, Portugal and France. The weather was very hot and the beaches
full of people on holiday, sunbathing and doing sports. I love the energy
and gladness that only the summer can bring to ordinary days. Phophets beach was
the one I liked the most. It is really wonderful, with clear waters and
white, fine sand. As a runner I couldn't waste the opportunity to cover some
kilometers in such a beautiful place, but due the high temperatures I was
able to run only 5km daily, sweating like a worn out kettle 😅. I'm eternally
grateful and I don't get tired of saying thank you Lord for everything you have
given to me.
Great job :)
25 luglio 2022
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Paulo Fonseca
Competenze linguistiche
Inglese, Portoghese
Lingua di apprendimento
Inglese
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