Although time travel is possible ,I don’t want go back to anytime or anywhere .Yesterday just yesterday , only different experience can create me .And don’t be afraid when something not happen ,tomorr

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Mindy236

Although time travel is possible ,I don’t want go back to anytime or anywhere .Yesterday just yesterday , only different experience can create me .And don’t be afraid when something not happen ,tomorrow is future,Just enjoy this moment .

28 feb 2024 23:34

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Even if time travel were possible ,I wouldn’t want to go back to anytime or anywhere. Yesterday is just yesterday. Different experiences make me who I am. Don’t be afraid when something doesn’t happen. Tomorrow is the future; Just enjoy this moment .

Hi Mindy! I made a few changes for you. Your vocabulary and thoughts are clear, just a few grammar challenges with verb tenses. I’d encourage you to focus on the conditional tense a bit more. Also, I loved your point of view. “Enjoy this moment”. I think we often focus on things we want to change instead of thinking about the positive aspects of the present. Thank you for your nice opinion! Why are you working on English? Is it for travel, study, family, immigration, or something else? Take care! Morgan

29 febbraio 2024

Although time travel is possible, I don’t want go back to anytime or any place. Yesterday just yesterday , only different experiences can create me. Don’t be afraid when something doesn't happen, tomorrow is the future. Just enjoy this moment .

Hi there Different experiences can create me? Mmm I am not totally sure what you are going for. Maybe try 'only different experiences can shape/change me.' Kind regards Nicci

29 febbraio 2024

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