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In my perspective money is not the only thing that can bring joy and happiness ,
That 's why sometimes we catch people who have a simple life without much confort and luxury and they are statisfaied and i can see the happiness in their eyes .
Happiness it kind of balance to find between what we want to be and we already had.
Dreams made to be achieved and one of the most exciting reason to keep fighting with enthisiasm is having goals.
However we need to realistic sometimes and accept our destiny , happiness for a lot of people is having a job and a roof over their head .
5 feb 2022 10:02
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From my perspective/ in my view, money is not the only thing that can bring joy and happiness.
That's why sometimes we meet/ come across people who have a simple life without much comfort or luxury and are satisfied and visibly happy.
Happiness is a kind of balance to strike between what we want/ aspire to be and being grateful for what we already had.
Dreams are made to be achieved and one of the most exciting reasons to keep fighting with enthusiasm is having goals.
However, we do need to be realistic sometimes and accept our lot; happiness for a lot of people is having a job and a roof over their head.
Excellent work! I've just made a few changes to the structure and wording. Hope it helps!
5 febbraio 2022
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Competenze linguistiche
Inglese, Francese
Lingua di apprendimento
Inglese
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