The wind blows the earth, the waves wash the beach, the clouds fly across the sky, where you pass, the air becomes sweet and fragrant. I appreciate the knowledge you have imparted to me.
It sounds natural？

Question

The wind blows the earth, the waves wash the beach, the clouds fly across the sky, where you pass,  the air becomes sweet and fragrant. I appreciate the knowledge you have imparted to me.
It sounds natural？

Answer

Yeah very good. The only thing, maybe: "The wind blows upon the earth." As it's poetic/literary, your version is okay too, though, it's less literal but more succinct. More a matter of taste.