The soup is too bland . We are gonna stew chicken today to pamper ourselves for working so hard this week. Weekend is a united day for our family. We cherish it so much
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The soup is too bland. We’re going to stew some chicken today to pamper ourselves after working so hard this week. The weekend is a special time for our family. We cherish it very much.
Level: B2/C1.
Your writing is clear and you express the idea of spending quality family time very well. You also use "bland" and "pamper ourselves" appropriately. The main issue was the expression "united day", which needed to be replaced with a more natural phrase. 😊
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The soup is too bland. We are going to stew some chicken today to treat ourselves after working so hard this week. The weekend is a time for our family to be together. We cherish this time very much.
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