Improved Alternative: --- Hi there! It feels just like a summer’s day today — the sun is intense, and the heat is everywhere. I’ve got classes until 3 this afternoon, then I’m going out for ice cream with my friends. Once I get home, I’ll crack on with my homework. It’s a full day! --- Tip -- • “A summer’s day” is the natural way to say it in English — this is a common phrase, especially in British English. -- • “I’m planning to get some ice cream” sounds more fluent than “I plan to go eat ice cream.” -- • “I’ve got classes” is a more casual and native way of saying “I have classes.” -- • “Once I get home” is slightly smoother than “When I get home.” -- • “Crack on with” is a fun British idiom meaning “start doing something seriously,” great for conversational tone. -- • “It’s a full day” is a natural way to say you’re busy, with a bit more variety. --