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Sarah, an actress retired last year.
She was popular as an actress.
Now she works as a writer.
She wrote some books after her retirement.
She is getting more popular as a writer after retirement.
13 giu 2024 10:40
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Sarah, an actress retired last year. She was popular as an actress, and now
works as a writer. She wrote some books after her retirement, and is becoming popular in that sphere.
You were correct to keep your sentences short. However, your writing was very stilted and unnatural. I changed it to make it flow a bit better
13 giugno 2024
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Arabo, Cinese (mandarino), Inglese, Tedesco, Coreano, Spagnolo
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