Here are three upgraded short versions you can try: 1. I visited Enoshima today. The weather wasn’t great, but the sea was stunning. I’d love to go back! 2. Today I went to Enoshima. Even though the weather was bad, the sea looked amazing. I want to visit again! 3. I spent the day in Enoshima. The sea was beautiful, despite the gloomy weather. I’ll definitely return! Tip: When describing nature, words like "very beautiful" can often be simplified to just "beautiful"—it's strong enough on its own. Also, repeating "go" is fine, but for variety, you could say "visit again" or "return someday" to make your English more expressive.