"It's sunny today. In our art class, we are always encouraged to draw objects like animals, daisies, or anything that interests us. However, drawing is not my forte and I often feel frustrated. Not long ago, my dad introduced me to a great artist named Piet Mondrian. I have been very much encouraged by his works, which are made using only three primary colors and a criss-cross pattern. He became one of the greatest painters in history and his works are beginner-friendly. I can precisely imitate his paintings without any trouble, and I think mine are pretty good too. Maybe one day they will become extremely valuable. My dad collects them, which is pretty smart of him." I made some minor changes to improve grammar and readability.

It’s sunny today. In our art class, they always ask us to draw objects like animal figures, daisies or whatever. But honestly drawing isn’t where I shine. Sometimes I even feel frustrated. Not long ago, my dad came up with an idea and introduced a great artist, Piet Mondrian, to me. I’ve been very much encouraged. By using only three primary colors and criss-cross-criss, he became one of the greatest painters in history. What’s more, his works are novice-friendly. I can precisely imitate his paintings without any trouble. Comparing like with like, I think mine are pretty good too. Maybe one day these can become extremely valuable as well. My dad is collecting them, smart arse.

It’s sunny today. In our art class, they always conduct us to draw objects like animal figures, daisies or whatever. But honestly drawing isn’t where I shine. Sometimes I even feel frustrated. Not long ago, my dad came up with an idea and introduced a great artist, Piet Mondrian, to me. I’ve been very much encouraged. By using only three primary colors and criss-cross-criss, he became one of the greatest painters in history. What’s more, his works are novice-friendly. I can precisely imitate his paintings without any trouble. Comparing like with like, I think mine are pretty good too. Maybe one day these can become extremely valuable as well. My dad is collecting them, whyrt arse.