Hello friends,
Original sentence:
It had become a glimmering girl,with apple blossom in her hair, who called me by my name and ran and faded through the brightening air.
this is from Yeats' poem: The Song of Wandering Aengus.
I tried to convert it into another form but I'm not sure which is correct:
1. It had become a glimmering girl,with apple blossom in her hair, calling me by my name and ran and faded through the brightening air.
2. It had become a glimmering girl,with apple blossom in her hair, calling me by my name and running and fading through the brightening air.
Thank you.