Hello!Today,I ate McDonalds bugger.It was so delicious. I’m pretty tired since it’s the weekend, so I’m going to sleep soon.

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ayane

16 mag 2025 12:39

Hello! Today, I ate a McDonald's burger. It was so delicious. I’m pretty tired since it’s the weekend, so I’m going to sleep soon.

Overall, very good, for better flow, you could make the first two sentences into 1: "Today, I ate a McDonald's burger, and it was so delicious."

16 mag 2025 13:09

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