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Nowadays, thanks to the advanced science and technology, online chatting is becoming more and more common in our daily life. We almost chat online with our friends, relatives and our lovers every day. Chatting online has a lot of pros. It’s really convenient, because no matter whenever and wherever you are, we can communicate with the person we want. It can also let us meet and know different people from all over the world. Especially for those who are a little shy in the real life and can’t be good at communicating face to face. However, there are also cons which we are not aware of. Chatting on line reduce us the chances to chat with the people in the real life. We all know if we want to have effective communication, the best way is to chat with the people face to face. It can decrease the possibility of misunderstanding, as we can feel the real emotion between each other. Besides, as there are too many social media platforms, people are more easy to chat with different strangers. It give the scammers chances to cheat more people. So I think although there are pros in communication online, but we should not be obsessed with it. We need to use it effectively.

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Nowadays, thanks to advanced science and technology, online chatting is becoming more and more common in our daily life. We chat online with our friends, relatives and lovers almost every day. Chatting online has a lot of pros. It’s really convenient, because no matter what time it is or where you are, you can communicate with the person you want to talk to. It can also help us meet and get to know different people from all over the world, especially for those who are a little shy in real life and aren't good at communicating face to face. However, there are also cons which we are not aware of. Chatting online reduces the opportunities we have to chat to people in real life. We all know that if we want to have effective communication, the best way is to chat to people face to face. It can decrease the possibility of misunderstandings, as we can feel the real emotions between each other. Besides, as there are too many social media platforms, people find it easier to chat to different strangers. It gives scammers the opportunity to cheat more people. So I think, although online communication has its pros, we should not be obsessed with it. We need to use it effectively.
This is really good, well done! You can't use 'no matter' and 'whenever/wherever' together, so you can either say 'it's really convenient, because wherever you are and whenever it is, you can communicate' or 'it's really convenient, because no matter what time it is or where you are, you can communicate'. I hope this helps! ✨
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Nowadays, thanks to advanced science and technology, online chatting is becoming more and more common in our daily life. We almost chat online with our friends, relatives, and our lovers every day. Chatting online has a lot of pros. It’s convenient, because no matter whenever and wherever you are, we can communicate with the person we want. It can also let us meet and know different people from all over the world. Especially for those who are a little shy in the real life and can’t be good at communicating face to face. However, there are also cons that we are not aware of. Chatting online reduces the chances to chat with people in the real life. We all know if we want to have effective communication, the best way is to chat with people face to face. It can decrease the possibility of misunderstanding, as we can feel the real emotion between each other. Besides, as there are too many social media platforms, people are easier to chat with different strangers. It gives the scammers chances to cheat more people. So I think although there are pros in communication online, but we should not be obsessed with it. We need to use it effectively.

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