Correct. I don't know how to add more emotion in it. please help with my English composition.... ^ ^ Long long ago , there is a beatiful land where lives many people. The magic yellow earth feed tens of thousands of yellow skin people. Here is my country --- China! I’m very pround of to be a Chinese. I talk about what I leaned by using my ABCs. A is ANCIENT. China is a country with a time-honored civilization and a land of ceremony .She created the ancient civilization. B is BETTER. China is not only an ancient country but also a young . Since 1978 when China opened up tto the outside world, she has grown up a lot. The development of China has amazed the world. C is CULTURE. China ‘s fascinating culture interest the people around the world. Such as KungFu, Peking opera,tea, Chinese cuisines .To summerise, China is insperational,amazing ! More and more people wan to learn China ,want to make friends with Chinese.I am lucky to have a voice here to introduce you my country. Thank you!