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2019年8月16日 私の日本語の復習 今日は天気も良いいでした! そして仕事を休み取った。 時間があるからとても嬉しい! 歌を聞くと日本語を勉強しました。 今日の歌が好きは「She Can」-Matt Sucichです。 すてきの歌から、本当におすすめです。 夜は星が見たいなと思うけど、空には雲がいっぱい出ていた。 星が大好き!⭐ Today was also a good weather. So I took the day off from work. Because I have so much time, I feel so happy! I listened to music and studied Japanese. Today my favorite song is She Can by Matt Sucich. It's a really wonderful song so I really recommend them! In the night, I really want to see the stars but the sky was full of clouds. I really love the stars!

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2019年8月16日 私の日本語の復習

今日は良い天気でした。も良いいでした!
そしてなので仕事のを休みを取った。(仕事の+休みをとる)
時間があるからとても嬉しい!
歌を聞いてくと日本語を勉強しました。
今日私が好きなの歌が好きは「She Can」-Matt Sucichです。
すてきのな歌なのでから、本当におすすめです。
夜は星が見たいなと思ったうけど、空には雲がいっぱい出ていた。(思う:present, 思った:past)
星が大好き!⭐

Today was also a good weather.
So I took the day off from work.
Because I have so much time, I feel so happy!
I listened to music and studied Japanese.
Today my favorite song is She Can by Matt Sucich.
It's a really wonderful song so I really recommend them!
In the night, I really want to see the stars but the sky was full of clouds.
I really love the stars!

**Good review! I added minor changes.

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