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A full sleep is very important I slept only 7 hours from necessarly 8 hours because of my day was bad. I went to work early but I finished late. I was sleepy a half day and I was slow than ever. I'm going to sleep by regimen again but more strictly. I've got comprehension that this is really important thing.

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A full night's sleep is very important.

I slept only 7 hours out of the necessary 8 hours, because of my day was bad. I went to work early, but I finished late. I was sleepy a half of the day and I was slower than ever.
I'm going to sleep by regimen again, but more strictly. I've understand that this is really important thing.

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Hey, I like your text! A full night's sleep is definitely very important, especially for language learners ;)

Just remember that when you want to say that something is more that something else, you often need to use an er at the end of the adjective to show that.

Have a wonderful day! :)
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A full nights sleep is very important

I slept only 7 hours from necessarly of the necessary 8 hours because of my day was bad. I went to work early but I finished late. I was sleepy a for half the day and I was slower than ever.
I'm going to sleep by regimen again but more strictly according to a more strict regimen again. I've got comprehension knowldege and that this is really the important thing.


Keep it up Alexey. Sleep is very important.
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A full nights sleep is very important

I slept for only 7 hours from out of the necessarly necessary 8 hours because of my day was so bad. I went to work early but I finished late. I was sleepy a for half of the day and I was slower than ever.
I'm going to sleep by regimen try a different words as this is not a natural word to use here again but more strictly. I've got comprehension understand that this is a really important thing.

Well done! We could do some work on articles and preposition 'to' and 'for'. x
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