[ IELTS_Task2 ] Practice_10
Topic:
Some countries in the world lack basic resources such as clean water, food and electricity.
What are the main causes of this?
What solutions could be used to tackle this problem?
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It is certainly the case that limited essential resources are hot potatoes, such as the scarcity of fresh water, food shortage and the dearth of power, affecting profoundly underdeveloped countries. In this essay, I will outline some of the causes of insufficient basic needs and put forward several viable solutions.
In terms of the reasons for insufficiency of life-saving resources, one of the most obvious could be that extreme weather regions, such as desert, polar, and volcanic areas, could not produce reliable supply for locals. In other words, finding abundant wildlife groups, drinking water, and electric power in harsh climate countries is fortunate but does not always happen. For example, many Ethiopian die from diseases associated with hygiene of fresh water or starve to death due to long-term sterile lands every year. Another to consider is that continuing wars devastate livelihood, meaning that people could not produce food and work stably. Therefore, when demand for living is much greater than supply, the dearth of resources takes place in unstable societies.
Turning to the solutions, one way to deal with the problem would be to give technological aid to poor countries. This is because inheritance of experts’ experience, such as scientific innovations and biotech techniques, will be pragmatic to helping in adapting to extreme weather, increasing food production, and cleaning up water-polluted areas. For instance, genetically modified crops and corn can be resistant to drought and adverse land condition, which benefits poor people who suffer from famine. Another way to tackle the problem is to make overseas financial support. By doing so, local governments would have enough money to improve fundamental infrastructure, such as water purification facility and power plants. As a result, citizens can use electrical machines to farm lands and keep water-related illness at bay.
In conclusion, severe natural conditions and frequent wars are the main culprits of the shortage of basic resources. Therefore, cutting-edge technology and fiscal support should be provided to needy countries for a better world.
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Dear Muhammad Kashif,
Thank you : )
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Hi! I would suggest that you use a good dictionary before adding a word or a phrase in your collection. The one which tells you how formal or informal is your target word. You can't place colloquialisms in your writing, period. https://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/hot-potato
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