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Valentin Tiavin
My dairy This morning I woke up very late and thought that I need to reset my sleep schedule. Yesterday I returned to home, I was in Moscow for 8 days and got used to that time. Time difference between Moscow and Novosibirsk is 4 hours. Moreover, today I’ve decided to start writing a diary. Today I read master’s thesis of Saint-Petersburg student, prepared my report for science conference, watched some videos on YouTube and had my hair cut.

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My diary (<--"Diary" = дневник, "dairy" = молочные продукты)

This morning, (<--English uses commas after introductory clauses.) I woke up very late and thought that I needed to reset my sleep schedule. Yesterday, I returned to home, (<--"I just returned home yesterday" would sound better here.) I was in Moscow for eight (<--It's best to write numbers under twelve as words.) days and got used to that time. The time difference between Moscow and Novosibirsk is four hours. Moreover, today, I’ve decided to start writing a diary.
Today, I read the master’s thesis of a Saint Petersburg student, prepared my report for my science conference, watched some videos on YouTube, (<--This comma is optional, but I recommend including it.) and had my hair cut.

Here you go, Valentin. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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