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matters Mattars which surrounding us can be sort and divided into 3 main states including solids, liquids and gases. Those 3 kinds of matters are different because of that the gap of moleculars that make up of matters are different. The tightest is solids and that makes moleculars pull each others too strong to let each other to be so active that can change their shape. The distance in liquid is looser and that makes moleculars pull each others not so strong that they can move a little freely and help liquid flow to adapt to whatever shape the containers have. The loosest is gases and that make moleculars pull each others light enough for freedom and make gases can take shapes whatever the containers have or go freely to fill up all the air.

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Mattars Matter, which surroundings us, can be sorted and divided into 3 main states: including solids, liquids and gasses. Those 3 kinds of matters states are different because of that the gap of moleculars in the molecules that make up of matters are different. The tightest is are solids and because that makes moleculars the molecule's pull each others is too so strong. *to let each other to be so active that can change their shape. The distance between molecules in liquid is looser and because that makes moleculars the molecule's pull each others not so strong is not as strong. that theyThey can move a little more freely and which helps the liquid flow to adapt to whatever shape the containers have. The loosest is molecules are in gases.** and that make moleculars pull each others light enough. for The freedom and make allows gases canto take shapes whatever whatever shape the containers have, or go freely to fill up all the air.

*Suggested Edit: Because they are bonded so tightly, this does not allow the molecules to change their shape.
**Suggested Edit: The molecules in gasses are spaced farther apart.
**Suggested Edit: to be released into the air

There are a lot of ways to write this, but hopefully these changes help!
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matters Matter

Mattars Matter which that surrounds us surrounding us can be sorted and divided into 3 main states: including solids, liquids and gases. Those These 3 kinds of matters are different because of that the gap spaces between of moleculars the molecules that make up of matters are different. The tightest space is solids Solids have the tightest space and that makes moleculars causes the molecules pull each others too strong to stay tightly compacted let each other to be so to prevent them from being too active so as to change their shape.active that can change their shape. The distance between each molecule in the liquid state is looser and that allows moleculars the molecules pull each others not so strong that they can move a little more freely and help allows the liquid flow to adapt to whatever shape the containers have. The loosest is gases Gases have the most loose structure and that make moleculars pull each others light enough for allows the molecules much more freedom to move around/about and make gases can give the gases more freedom of movement to take the shapes within whatever the containers it is in or go to freely to fill up all the air.

Hallo, I have tried to remain as close as possible to your original words so as not to introduce too many differences between your text and mine. So I hope something here helps a little. Kind regards, Chris.

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