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How the government acted Since the outbreak, the area where I live has been bearing the burnt. At the beginning, it's been not easy to adapt to the strict measures imposed by the government. We now know they were necessary but, at that time, the situation was so confusing. Such decisions were hardly understandable, as they literally upended our lives. There was the feeling they were going to deprive us of our freedom, which couldn't be tolerated in a country which is meant to be a democratic nation. Moreover, even envisaging a pretty-long lockdown period was absolutely mind-blowing. After some weeks, and all things considered, I think I must be chuffed about how the emergency has been handled. The situation has been worsening by leaps and bounds, so it must be extremely tricky to cope with all of that. Anyway, I sense that, except for some understandable stumbles, the Italian government and all the personnel in my region is operating well, also thanks to some tweaks along the way.

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How the Government has acted

Since the outbreak started, the area where I live has been bearing/has borne the burnt brunt of it. At the beginning, it's been it was not /it wasn't easy to adapt to the strict measures imposed by the government. We now know they were necessary but, at that time, the situation was so confusing. Such decisions were hardly understandable, as they literally upended our lives. There was the feeling that they were going to deprive us of our freedom, which couldn't be tolerated in a country which is meant to be a democratic nation. Moreover, even envisaging a pretty-long lockdown period was absolutely mind-blowing. After some weeks, and all things considered, I think I must be ❊chuffed /satisfied about how the emergency has been handled. The situation has been worsening by leaps and bounds, so it must be extremely tricky to cope with all of that. Anyway, I sense that, except for some understandable stumbles, the Italian government and all the personnel in my region is are operating well, also thanks to some tweaks /adjustments along the way.
Very well-written !
❊slang word relating to personal feelings, not really appropriate in a semi-formal objective report
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How the Government acted

Since the outbreak, the area where I live has been bearing the brunt of the lockdown. At the beginning, it was not easy to adapt to the strict measures imposed by the government. We now know they were necessary but, at that time, the situation was so confusing. Such decisions were not easy to take, as they literally upended our lives. There was the feeling they were going to deprive us of our freedom, which couldn't be tolerated in a country which is meant to be a democratic nation. Moreover, even envisaging a pretty-long lockdown period was absolutely mind-blowing. After some weeks, and all things considered, I fell chuffed about how the emergency has been handled. The situation has been worsening by leaps and bounds, so it must be extremely tricky to cope with all of that. Anyway, I sense that except for some understandable stumbles, the Italian government and all the personnel in my region are also operating well despite some tweaks along the way.

Normally you can place also at the beginning or end of a statement, but I have placed it at the beginning in the last sentence, for better clarity and readability.
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thank you Renato :)
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Vanessa, andrà tutto bene. come è scritto, se Dio è per noi, chi sarà contro di noi.

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