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Making sentences -Thunder It’s heavy raining ,accompanying with thunder and lightning. -Professional He is professional in his work. -Scenery When you stand on an bridge watch a scenery,you become a nice picture in other eyes. -Worse This worse goods isn’t worth so much. -Alcohol I don’t like drinking alcohol.But occasionally I would drink under certain environment,such as I have dinner with my husband near a river under moonlight.It’s romance. -Too much -Average -Apartment It’s needs too much money to buy a house in big cities.An average small apartment would costs RMB 10 millions. -Elevator Elevators are divided into commercial ladders and home lifts. -Air Conditioner In very hot summer ,we have to stay in an air conditioner house from day and night. -Client My clients come from all walks of life.I like to talk with them in order to knew the economic situation of each industry. -Fan Sometimes I can’t distinguish the words ‘fan’ and ‘fun’. Now I know fan is a tool can make temperature down in summer.If I love someone very much I can say,’I’m your fans.’ Fun means have a joke. -decorated -Ketchup That McDonalds closed down last week,because it needed to redecorate.I like fries with ketchup in that shop. -Swimming Suit My English teacher told me ,’when you swim you should wear a swimming suit’.When I heard that ,I can’t believe my ears,swiming with suit?Oh ,my god!Then after lesson,I looked that word in my dictionary,I got it.My poor English had me a joke. -Protect We should protect ourselves in the special period. -Heaven We only live once.There are not heaven or hell.Work hard. Love the people around you. Cherish the things around you. Enjoy life. Let there be less regret and more completeness. -Honk the horn We were missing the people in another world ,so all the cars were honking their horns and we lowered the flag at half-mast. -Remember We’ll always remember them.
7 apr 2020 13:15
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Making sentences

-Thunder
It’s heavy raining ,accompanying with thunder and lightning.
It's raining heavily, acoomanied by thunder and lightning.
It's heavy rain with thunder and lightning.

-Professional
Correct He is professional in his work.

-Scenery
When you stand on an bridge watch a scenery,you become a nice picture in other eyes.
When you stand on a bridge and look at scenery...(I don't think I understand what you want to say at the end of the sentence. I'm sorry.)

-Worse
This worse goods isn’t worth so much.
The worse goods aren't worth so much. (I feel like I would say "the worst goods". English speakers often use "worse" to compare. Example: How are the goods in this store? They are worse than in the other store and aren't worth so much.)

-Alcohol
Correct I don’t like drinking alcohol.
But occasionally OR On occasion I will <s>would</s> drink <s>under certain environment</s>,such as when I have dinner with my husband near a river under the moonlight. It’s romantic <s>romance</s>.

-Too much
-Average
-Apartment
It’s <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">needs</s> too much money to buy a house in big cities.An average small apartment would cost<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">s</s> 10 million RMB <s>10 millions.</s>

-Elevator
Correct Elevators are divided into commercial ladders and home lifts.

-Air Conditioner
During a <s>In</s> very hot summer ,we have to use the <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">stay in an</s> air conditioner in the house from day and night.
The air conditioner is a thing you use so you have an air conditoned house day and night.

-Client
My clients come from all walks of life.I like to talk with them in order to know <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">knew</s> the economic situation of each industry.

-Fan
Sometimes I can’t distinguish the words ‘fan’ and ‘fun’. Now I know a fan is a tool that can <s>make</s> lower the temperature <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">down</s> in summer. If I love someone very much I can say,’I’m your fan<s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">s</s>.’ Fun means to make <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">have</s> a joke.

-decorated
-Ketchup
Correct That McDonalds closed down last week,because it needed to redecorate.I like fries with ketchup in that shop.

-Swimming Suit
My English teacher told me ,’when you swim you should wear a swimming suit’.When I heard that ,I couldn't <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">can’t </s>believe my ears, swimming swiming with suit?Oh ,my god!Then after the lesson,I looked up that word in my dictionary,I got it.My poor English played a joke on me <s style="background-color: rgb(250, 204, 204);">had me a joke</s>.

-Protect
We should protect ourselves in the special period.

-Heaven
We only live once.There is no <s>are not</s> heaven or hell.Work hard. Love the people around you. Cherish the things around you. Enjoy life. Let there be less regret and more completeness.

-Honk the horn
Correct We were missing the people in another world ,so all the cars were honking their horns and we lowered the flag at half-mast.

-Remember
Correct We’ll always remember them.


Corrections * Comments
7 aprile 2020
I enjoyed your sentences. Your English is quite good. Your story about a swimming suit made me laugh. It was a fun story.
7 aprile 2020
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