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An interesting experience Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! In the national day of 2018, I went to a very beautiful scenic spot with my classmates. Under the hill, there were many people selling fruit. Mango is that city’s famous fruit. Their mango is very huge. I bought a mango and an apple there. They were packed in a plastic bag. And then I climbed the mountain with the plastic bag on my right hand. When we were climbing the mountain, we discussed if we could meet monkeys. We have heard that some monkeys grab tourists’ camera. When we got halfway up the mountain, we took a short break and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Suddenly a monkey behind me rushed towards my direction and grabbed my plastic bag. It sat on the ground eating the mango calmly. It is so clever that it bit off the skin of the mango and ate the flesh. I was scared and frightened. Fortunately, it didn’t attack me. Meanwhile, I was excited because I saw the monkey eating mango. It’s interesting. All of us took pictures around it.

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An interesting experience

Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks!

On a national day in 2018, I went to a very beautiful scenic spot with my classmates. Under the hill, there were many people selling fruit. Mango is that city’s famous fruit. Their mangoes are very huge. I bought a mango and an apple there. They were packed in a plastic bag. And then I climbed the mountain with the plastic bag in my right hand. When we were climbing the mountain, we discussed if we could meet monkeys. We have heard that some monkeys grab tourists’ cameras. When we got halfway up the mountain, we took a short break and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. Suddenly a monkey behind me rushed towards my direction and grabbed my plastic bag. It sat on the ground eating the mango calmly. It is so clever that it bit off the skin of the mango and ate the flesh. I was scared and frightened. Fortunately, it didn’t attack me. Meanwhile, I was excited because I saw the monkey eating the mango. It’s interesting. All of us took pictures around it.

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