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Every conversation is living being It could sound a bit awkward but imagine that for a second. You begin chatting with your best friend and something new is created. Conversation starts with a greeting (a new being was born). Afterwards you find a common place (it's in its childhood), then both of you are exchanging your thoughts (the being is growing). Next, you and your partner build up rapport, the conversation has its own style (the being's personality is developed). Finally, when the conversation is finished, the being doesn't die, it stays put. This being will help to rise up the next one (in future conversations). Probably this is the strangest entry I've written recently, 😅 If you had the courage to read it, I'll appreciate any feedback. 😉

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Every conversation is a living being

It could sound a bit awkward but imagine this for a second: **

You begin chatting with your best friend and something new is created. Conversation starts with a greeting (a new being is born). Afterwards you find common ground (the being is in its childhood), then both of you are exchanging your thoughts (the being is growing). Next, you and your partner build up rapport, the conversation has its own style (the being's personality is developed).

Finally, when the conversation is finished, the being doesn't die; it stays alive*. This being will help raise up the next one (in future conversations).

This is probably the strangest entry I've written recently, 😅

If you had the courage to read it, I'd appreciate any feedback. 😉


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** It sounds strange to hear 'imagine that' before you've described what 'that' is. Hence the correction with 'this' -- and the semicolon at the end of the phrase.
Another alternative, "It could sound a bit awkward but imagine the following for a second."

* 'to stay put' means to remain somewhere without moving.
'to stay alive' is my correction suggestion since it pairs better with the expressed idea of not dying when the conversation has ended.
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Every conversation is a living being

It could sound a bit awkward but imagine that for a second.

You begin chatting with your best friend and something new is suddenly created. The conversation starts with a greeting (a new being was having been born). Afterwards you find a common place (it's in your childhood), then both of you are exchanging your thoughts (the being is growing). Next, you and your partner build up rapport, and the conversation has developed its own style (the being's personality is now developed/molded).

Finally, when the conversation is finished, the being doesn't die - it stays put. This being will help to rise up the next one the next one to rise (in future conversations).

Probably This is problably the strangest entry I've written recently.😅

If you had the courage to read it, I'll appreciate any feedback. 😉

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