CP Online
Hi! I want to tell you a story about CP Online.
CP Online, was a game online that I played in quarantine. But, a week ago approximately, the game was closed because, that game had many issues with another company. I belong a community about CP online, and now we are sad, because we can't play that anymore.
Club Penguin was an important game of our childhood, and when it was closed in 2017 and reappeared in 2018 with another name... that makes us happy again.
But now, in a difficult time for everyone, we need to stay together, we want to relax and we are trying to get out our problems for a moment. That kind of people have to stop the selfishness... I think that company did wrong...
Goodbye CP 2005 - 2020
I choose a picture of my character in that game.
This writing was more difficult to me because I don't used the translator, I have to practice. So, sorry if I make many mistakes.
Thank you very much for your time. Have a nice day.
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CP Online
Hi! I want to tell you a story about CP Online.
CP Online, was an online game online that which I played have been playing (if you're still in quarantine) in during quarantine. But, approximately a week ago approximately, the game was closed shut down because, that game it had many issues with another company. I belong to a community about for CP online, and now we are sad, because we can't play that it anymore.
Club Penguin was an important game of our childhood, and when it was closed shut down in 2017 and reappeared in 2018 with another name,... that it makes made us happy again.
But now, in a difficult time for everyone, we need to stay together,. wWe want to relax and we are trying to forget about our problems for now a moment. That kind of people These companies have to stop the being selfishness... I think that company did something wrong....
Goodbye CP 2005 - 2020
I choose have chosen a picture of my character in that the game.
This writing was more difficult to for me because I don't didn't used the translator, since I have to practice. So, sorry if I make many a lot of mistakes.
Thank you very much for your time. Have a nice day.
This is very good, especially given that you didn't use a translator! It all made sense, I've just been very picky to make it sound as good as possible. Well done!
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CP Online
Hi! I want to tell you a story about CP Online.
CP Online was a game online that I played in quarantine. But, a week ago approximately, the game was closed because that game had many issues with another company. I belong to an online CP community, and now we are sad, because we can't play it anymore.
Club Penguin was an important game of our childhood, and when it was closed in 2017 we were sad but when it reappeared in 2018 under another name ... that made us happy again.
But now, in difficult times for everyone, we need to stay together, we want to relax and forget our problems for a moment. Such people should stop the selfishness... I think that company did wrong...
Goodbye CP 2005 - 2020
I choose a picture of my character in the game.
This writing was more difficult to me because I didn't use a translator, and I have to practice. So, sorry if I made many mistakes.
Thank you very much for your time. Have a nice day.
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Thank you very much Phoebe! (:
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Hello! See the correction below. You did great! Don't worry mistake are good, it's all part of the process :)
Hi! I want to tell you a story about CP Online. CP Online, was a game online that I played in quarantine. But, "approximately" a week ago , the game was closed because "it" had many issues with another company. I belong "to" a "CP online" community, and now we are sad because we can't play anymore.
Club Penguin was an important game of our childhood, and when it was closed in 2017 and reappeared in 2018 with another name, "it made" us happy.
But now, "it is a" difficult time for everyone and we need to stay together. We want to relax and "forget about" our problems for a moment. "Companies shouldn't be so selfish, I think it's wrong."
Goodbye CP 2005 - 2020
I choose a picture of my character in "the" game.
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