Typhoon is coming.
It's rainy heavily outside.By the bluster of the wind and rain,my trousers are wet in a few minute,on the way home.
My city is located in the central south coast of China.Usually there are many typhoon will take place in summer ,so we always feel cool during the season.But this summer is much hotter.Because several typhoon play hide-and-seek with us this year.
When typhoon is coming ,children are looking forwards to the yellow early warning signal.Because they needn't to go to school.And when the signal's colour become to blue,all the citizens will do not to work.I think that a happy thing.
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Coming Typhoon is coming.
It's is raining heavily outside. By The blustery1 of the wind and rain ,made my trousers are wet in a few within minutes as I trod on the way home.
My city home is located in the central south coast of China. Usually there are many typhoons will take place occur in during summer. ,so we always feel cool during This makes the season feel cool. But However, this summer is much hotter .Because than usual and several typhoons play hide-and-seek with eluded us this year.
When typhoon is coming ,Children are looking forwards to the yellow early warning signal for approaching typhoons. This is because they don't needn't to go to school! .And When the signal's colour become to turns blue, all the all adults need not report to work. citizens will do not to work.I think that A happy thing for us all.
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1. Great that you know this word!
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