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the weather It is very hot outside, actually i don`t like this weather, but i want to swim~~ya staying in the water will make me feel cool. However i never go to the siwmming pool in my town as the water there is very dirty and cold,if i swim there maybe i`ll get a cold. I was born in summer ,when i was a student i like the summer holiday,but now it has changed . On one hand the weather is affected by the environment pollution ,it becomes hotter and hotter.On the other hand,i`m not a student now i have to go to find my own job and make money. I don`t want to go out becouse of the hot weather , but i have no choise as the job itself won`t come to find me. Fortunately next month i`ll go to work, although it is very far and i have to spend much time on the way , i want to gain morn experience after all i just graduated from the university. No matter how hard it is ,i`ll try my best to do it~~Come on Wind!

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when we were young ,summer holiday we had often gone to swim. Did you forget the happy time?

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