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When people succeed,It is because of hard work .Luck has nothing to do with success . . Hard work ,as we all know , seems to be an essential part of success that we pursue for.It is the hard work that makes us go through subsequent difficulties and reach to our goals finally.Therefore ,It is suggested that hard work turns to be the decisive fators on measuring success while luck is proved to be irrelevented.As far as I am concerned ,luck factually plays an important role to people who is pursuing for success . .First , to work hard is definitely a required part for success.By this I mean ,before reaching to the successful goal ,people should work really hard so that huge difficulties can be settled easily ,which will help them prepare well for the future challenges.Thus ,hard work becomes the necessary portion for success. Second ,luck is considered to be another effective elements on making success.That is to say ,luck gradually influences people on making success .This causes unexpected results even though its effect is tiny .When two excellent men are searching for job together,It is unlikely for the company to hire these two employees at the same time .Therefore ,these two men are arranged differently :one is hired by the company ,the other is seeking for other job again .So we can see,Life is different for their different fortune . Third ,help from others is proved to be beneficial to be successful. By this I mean ,assistance from others do help us in solving problems in order to be successful since we are limited in handling variety of difficulties.It turns out to be more easier for us to obtain success when with some help from others .To our surprise ,with others’ help ,some can be successful without any efforts . In general ,I agree with the point that both hard and luck profundly influence on success.
27 dic 2011 15:12
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9 maggio 2014
Hi ,everyone ,If this is the independent writing for TOEFL test ,can you help me to correct it ?please...
27 dicembre 2011
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