My hometown
I was born in Heilongjing province.There is very cold in winter and always has heavy snow . Many people go to there for ski.The famous Ice big world in it.In summer,it is cool and comforable.I left my hometown for three years.I went back every year.
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My hometown
I was born in Heilongjing province. There It is very cold [there] in winter and always has heavy snow. Many people go to there for to ski. The famous big Ice big world in it is there. In summer, it is cool and comforable. I left my hometown for three years ago but I went go back every year.
Pretty good work Mary,
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