David and Mary again. Is my translatin OK?

Mary: Your blue shirt? 你的蓝衬衫呢？ Can’t Didn't you see? 你没看到见吗？haha at first I thought you were saying 瞎了嗎 I’m wearing it. 我在穿着它呢。
David: Oh …哦。。。
Mary: I feel good in it. 再说还穿得很舒服。Sorry, darling, you can’t wear it. 对不起心肝，亲爱too formal.  I use, "打玲" transliteration of "darling"，你不能穿喔了。
I want to wear it today. 今天我想要穿這套的。

David: But … 但可是。。。
Mary: Wear your white shirt. 穿你的白色的衬衫穿不行啊？ It looks very good on you. 你穿起来还很好看。 Chinese won't say like this.白色很襯(合)你

David: Maybe you are right, but … 也许...你所得对，可是。。。
Mary: Here it is. 给你。 Put it on. 穿上吧。
You never wear it. 切，This is sarcastic and dismissive.  ai yo! forgotten the characters!) 从来都就没有穿过啦。

David and Mary again. Is my translatin OK?

Mary:
Your blue shirt? 你的蓝衬衫？
Can’t you see? 你没看见吗？
I’m wearing it. 我穿着它呢。
David:
Oh …哦。。。
Mary:
I feel good in it. 再说我穿着它还很舒服。
Sorry, darling, you can’t wear it. 对不起，亲爱的，你不能穿了。
I want to wear it today. 今天我想穿的。
David:
But … 但是。。。
Mary:
Wear your white shirt. 你的穿白色的衬衫穿不行啊？
It looks very good on you. 你穿起来还很好看。
David:
Maybe you are right, but … 也许你所说得对，可是。。。
Mary:
Here it is. 给你。
Put it on. 穿上吧。
You never wear it. 切，你从来都没有穿过啦。（哈哈哈，你的darling是不是经常用这样的语气跟你撒娇？）

David and Mary again. Is my translatin OK?

Mary:
Your blue shirt? 你的蓝衬衫？
Can’t you see? 你没看见吗？
I’m wearing it. 我正穿着它呢。
David:
Oh …哦。。。
Mary:
I feel good in it. 再说而且还很舒服。
Sorry, darling, you can’t wear it. 对不起，亲爱的，你不能穿了。
I want to wear it today. 今天我想穿的。
David:
But … 但是。。。
Mary:
Wear your white shirt. 你穿你的白色的衬衫不行啊？ 

It looks very good on you. 而且你穿起来还很好看。
David:
Maybe you are right, but … 也许你所说得对，可是。。。
Mary:
Here it is. 给你。
Put it on. 穿上吧。
You never wear it. 切，你从来都没有穿过啦。

受不鸟了.....你的口语化中文实在是太好了....