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INTERNET USE???
OK, I think I've been using the internet completely wrong. I thought it was a communication and learning tool. However, it turns out I am the only one who thinks like that!! On every site I join, I find so many interesting people from abroad; we start talking, and after... abouuut... five minutes they start asking me about my ''body stucture''?! ( :/ )... Do I look that cheap? Do I look that desperate??
I've been using the internet for years and I dont have a single trusted friend from it. I think chatting with people from all over the world opens your mind (not your legs) and that makes your point of view about perspective on your own everyday life a little more interesting.
So if anyone has any manual about internet use in 2012, please pass it over.
Thank you!! :)
I corrected it to make you sound like a proper blogger. The sms-shorthand isn't really effective, and the frequent use of "..." made you seem lost and unsure. You have a good point to make, so it really needs punch!
I understood what you intended by stretching "about", but "abououout" sounds liek a dog barking. :P
Anyway, yes there are pervs online. Just inform them that they are a "sad little f***", report them to the site admin and leave it at that. ^^
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