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As A Teenager..
It's been a long time since I posted my latest last note. Today I just want to write about me as a teenager. When While I'm in puberty phase going through puberty, I always want to do something new. Something I've never done before. But I always control it so it never plunges me into negative things. (But I always control my desires, so they never get me in trouble.)
By the way, i just finished my study in Junior High School and will be an High School student in the middle of July (and I will start High School in the middle of July). I always think about that. I will find new teachers, new friends, everything. And I feel a little worried about it. I just hope there's nothing bad will be happen to me. That's all XD
Well written. Your English is quite good for someone so young. I use red is for correcting mistakes. Blue is for suggestions - meaning what you wrote is correct English, but what I wrote in blue is more natural (lebih enak gitu). Tapi gue kira bahwa "always control my desires" gitu, sedikit bohong kan? Ngga ada orang sempurna terutama sambil masa pubertas. :P
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