It can be paradigm

A short story by Paulo Coelho

This is from the book, of "Fathers, Sons and Grandsons".  As I returned read it in a from Farsi translation.   version and I haven’t not read it in the English version of this book yet.  Here is my English version.  I know there is changes besides lots of will be many mistakes in it but just wanted to still a great way to practise my English.

In the desert, not many fruits grew.  there were few fruits. (there were no fruits anymore?) God called back commandedone of his Prophets to spread his law,  and said: "everybody can eat Tell my people that each of them may eat only one fruit each a day."

This rule law continued for generations and caused protecting protected the environment. The seeds fell down into the earth, and new trees grew. After awhile turning it the desert in to the into a fertile region. It caused suberbs` jealousy. But people still have been eating only one fruit a day and they have been staunch to the to the rule sent by their prophet but beside they didn’t let another towns and villages inhabitants use the fruits, this only caused all the fruits fell dawn and spoiled. This caused jealousy in other places.  They did not share the fruits with outsiders and because the law was religiously obeyed, extra fruits that fell to the ground went to waste.

God commanded once more to his prophet to send his word, sent another prophet and told him: "Share the extra fruits Let people eat fruit what they want and share them with your thy neighbor."hoods."

However, the prophet was stoned to death because the old guard believed that he was uprooting tradition and the word of God.  The young, however began to question the custom but it was forbidden to do so.  They decided to leave the religion of their forefathers and decided to eat and share the fruits with others.  Those who still cling onto the established custom are known as the true believers.  Indeed they refused to believe that the world has changed and that they need to change with the change.

Excellent story.

The prophet came to the town with the new message but they stoning him due to this belief became mores and rooted deeply into their body and soul and it couldn`t be changed easily. Little by little young people were asking themselves: "Where the hell is this primative custom come from?" But they couldn’t questioning ancient customs anymore. So they decided to leave their religion then they could eat what ever they want and could give rest of them to other indigents. The only people who called themselves as religionist they have been faithful with the old customs.
Indeed they didn’t know the world has changed and should be change with the change.

It can be paradigm

A short story by Paulo Coelho
This is from the book of "Fathers, Sons and Grandsons" As I returned it from Farsi version and I haven’t read the English version of this book I know there is changes besides lots of mistake in it but just wanted to practice English:

There were few fruits in the desert. God called back one of his Prophets and said: "everybody can eat one fruit each day."

This rule continued for generations and caused a protecting environment. The seeds fell down into the earth, and new trees grew. After awhile turning it in to the fertile region. It caused suberbs` jealousy. But people still have been eating only one fruit a day and they have been staunch to the to the rule sent by their prophet but beside they didn’t let another towns and villages inhabitants use the fruits, this only caused all the fruits fell dawn and spoiled.

God sent another prophet and told him: "Let people eat fruit what they want and share them with your neighborhoods."
The prophet came to the town with the new message but they stoning him due to this belief became mores and rooted deeply into their body and soul and it couldn`t be changed easily. Little by little young people were asking themselves: "Where the hell is this primative custom come from?" But they couldn’t questioning ancient customs anymore. So they decided to leave their religion then they could eat what ever they want and could give rest of them to other indigents. The only people who called themselves as religionist they have been faithful with the old customs.
Indeed they didn’t know the world has changed and should be change with the change.

It can be paradigm

A short story by Paulo Coelho 
This is from the book "Fathers, Sons and Grandsons" . This book is in farsi and I haven’t read it's English version yet. I know there will be both changes and lots of mistakes,but i think i need to practise my English: 

In the desert, few fruits grew. God commanded one of his Prophets to tell people that:" every person may eat one fruit a day."  

This rule law continued for generations and caused protected environment. The seeds fell down into the desert and new trees grew. After awhile turning it in to into a fertile region. This caused jealousy in the suburbs. People remained loyal to the law and they ate only one fruit a day but because they didnt share the fruits with inhabitants in other towns and villages, all of the fruits went to waste.

God sent another prophet and commanded him to send his word: "Let people eat whatever fruit they want and share them with their neighbors." 
The prophet came to the town with the new message but they stoned him because this belief by then was became an unchaneable mores deep in their body and soul. Little by little the young, began to call the custom into question: "Where did this primitive custom come from?" ,although they were prohibited to do so.They decided not to follow their custom , so that they could eat whatever they want and gave the rest to other indigents . Those who remained loyal to the ingrained custom are known as faithful followers.
Indeed ,they didn’t want to know the world has changed and that they need to conform with it.

It can be paradigm

A short story by Paulo Coelho 
This is from the book of (You have used the preposition"from",so you dont need to use the preposition "of")"Fathers, Sons and Grandsons" .As This book is in farsi and I returned it from Farsi version and I haven’t read theit's English version of this book yet. I know there is will be both changes and besides lots of mistakes in it ("in it" is additional, because it is quite clear that you are talking about mistakes and changes in the book)but i think i need just wanted to practise (practice is noun)my English: 

In the desert, there were few fruits grew (you have to use appropriate verb for the subject ). (there were no fruits anymore?) God called back commanded one of his Prophets to tell people that and said: "everybody can every person may (can shows ability and may shows possiblity)eat one fruit each a day."  

This rule law (rule is an instruction, for example rules of Football)continued for generations and caused protected environment. The seeds fell down into the earth, desert and new trees grew. After awhile turning it in to into the a fertile region. It This caused suberbs jealousy (direct object) in the suburbs. But people still have been eating only one fruit a day and they have been staunch (staunch here is verb not adjective)to the to the rule sent by their prophet but beside they didn’t let another towns and villages inhabitants use the fruits, this only caused all the fruits fell dawn and spoiled. People remained loyal to the law and they ate only one fruit a day but because they didnt share the fruits with inhabitants in other towns and villages, all of the fruits went to waste.

God sent another prophet and told  commanded him to send his word: "Let people eat fruit whatever fruit they want and share them with your their neighborhoods." 
The prophet came to the town with the new message but they stoned him due to because this belief by then was became an unchaneable mores and rooted deeply into deep in their body and soul. and it couldn`t be changed easily. Little by little the young (The + adjective ), people were asking themselves began to call the custom into question: "Where the hell is did this primitive custom come from?" ,although they were prohibited to do soBut they couldn’t questioning ancient customs anymore. So They decided not to leave follow their religion custom ,then so that they could eat what ever whatever they want and could give gave the rest of them to other indigents. The only people who called themselves as religionist they have been faithful with the old customs. Those who remained loyal to the ingrained custom are known as faithful followers.
Indeed ,they didn’t want to know the world has changed and that they need to should be change with the change. conform with it.