Sun's Diary 0704
I was watching TV when my father goes home.I 'm very happy and can't help laugh.My father don't know why.So he ask me . I tell he because of I saw the star who is loved by me. After that I talk with my father about star.My father tell me he like Zhangxueyou.Because of he thinks zhangxueyou singing is very well.But I don't like Zhangxueyou.Because I think he is not young and cool.So I tell my father I 'mlike Zhang Jie.He is very cool.So I 'm very like his song.Maybe I and my father don't in a century.
Writer: Sun, fifteen-year-old , middle school student
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Sun's Diary 0704
I was watching TV when my father goes home.I 'm very happy and can't stop laugh.My father didn't know why.So he ask me . I tell him that I saw my idol star. After that I talk to my father about idol star.My father tell me that he likes Zhangxueyou.Because he thinks zhangxueyou can sing very well.But I don't like Zhangxueyou.Because I think he is not young and cool.So I tell my father that I like Zhang Jie.He is very cool.So I really like his song.Maybe my father and i didn't live in the same century.
Writer: Sun, fifteen-year-old , middle school student
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It is good that you could express your own idea. It is common for the parents and the child have different idol about popular star.呵呵~
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