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A letter to my sister~~~ Dear Maomao older sister: I am so sad that I had wrote a E-mail for such long time,How are you,Mike.and your family.Aunt and Ningning sister and old brother are fine.Aunt and me always have breakfast in the early morning . She has good appetite,Don't worried.we often climb a mountain nearby our family.so everything is ok.~~ How is the weather in your country, China has being in summer,everyday is so hot,especially the south of China.The temperature always exceeds 31 degree recently.In my mind .I had felt very hot when the temperature was got about 27-29 degree in my childhood.Maybe the main reason is ((that) global warming. I am in skirt everyday.it is much cool than pants.and you?Old sister. what kind of dress are you in. How is Mike.I wish I can see and hold him in one day.oops..he must have grown a young and high boy when I meet him.Hahaha~~~ I am learning English every night,my aunt told me whether my way of learning is right and effective .I thought this problem and tried to find some better methods .A language friend who I met on internet signed up the network course in summer holiday,this course will be start in every night,this time arrangement is good for me as a work.but there have a disadvantage that it will spent every night,If I should do something I will miss some courses.it is so contradictory. Another guy told me his experience what he attend a training school in Yangsuo(阳朔) ,Guangxi .he almost learned for 2 months and then changed a job as a manager,I thought maybe he had been having rich technical experience and skill.so this is a good change in his career. I considered going to a full-time training school by the end of the year.I will be involve in another problem that I should be quit.my friend told me don't do that .that just achieve the short-term effect in the training school .learning English is a long time . Another mine reason is that he is 30years old.so I am still young,I have more chance than he.However I must be thinking how to improve my English level .which method will be better for me. Ok.~Old sister .Have a good day,Miss you and Mike very much,Don't worried about aunt,I will always to accompany her. Best Wish!
12 lug 2012 03:19
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This is an ambitious letter. You need to repair your errors with preposition use ("to") and articles ("a" and "the"). Also, always include one space after a comma or period, and do not put a space before commas and periods.
13 luglio 2012
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