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A Trip to Paradise
After I quit my job, I got two weeks of free time before I had to go to the new company. Because the life makes me feel so tired, I planned to have a trip to relax myself.
I was thinking of the weather of these days. It’s too cold in the north, and it’s so wet in the south. In the south-part of southern China, there is a place called “all the seasons like spring”. That is Yun Nan Yunnan. It also has the most national ethnic minority minorities ethnics in China. So I decided to go there. Because my friends were busy working these days, I had to go by myself. I prepared a big bag which is full of my clothes, camera, sun glasses sunglasses, suntan lotion, and so on.
First The first station is was Li Jiang Lijiang. There are many old apartments, and some old waterwheels. There is a famous place — Yu Long Snow Mountain.
I bought many handmade goods and tasty food. I made friends with 3 three girls and 3 three boys in Li Jiang Lijiang, and they invited me to go to the Lu Gu Lugu Lake. It took our 7 seven people 1 one day, about 30km, to walk about thirty kilometers around the lake on foot. It’s It was crazy, but we do did it. The sky is was so blue. The lake is was so clear. Lugu Lake is always like a beautiful young woman. The lake has another name — “women country”. Lu Gu Lugu Lake is a mystery mysterious place. There is a special national minority — MoSuo Mosuo (摩梭族) . They have an amazing rite. A woman is up to eligible for marriage. She just opens the door of her room at night. and The man who she loves will climbs up to in the window, stays with her for the whole night, and then goes away in the morning of next day. But they don’t get marry in law legally married. Sometimes, women have many lovers; sometimes, the children don’t know who is his their father is.
That’s amazing! But the rite still exists in the nation.
This trip is was special for me, not only because I find found those beautiful scenes, but also because I did it by myself. I feel it’s felt it was exciting and stimulating..
I have got everything ready after this trip. [这句话不清楚。]
A trip to paradise
After I quit my job, I had two weeks free time before I go to the new company. Since my busy life makes me feel so tired, I planned to have a trip to relax myself.
Thinking of the weather of these days I knew that it’s too cold in the north, and so wet in the south. There is a place called “all seasons like spring”, which is in southern part of china and has the most national minority ethnics .I decided to go there and since my friends were busy working these days, I had to go by myself. I`ve prepared a big bag which is full of my clothes, camera ,sun glasses, suntan lotion and so on.
First station is Li Jiang.There are many old apartments and some old waterwheels.There also is a famous place—Yu Long Snow Mountain.
I bought many handmade goods and tasty foods.I made friends with 3 girls and 3 boys in Li Jiang, and they invited me to go to the Lu Gu Lake.It took us 1 day, to walk about 30km around the lake on foot. It may seem crazy ,but we did it.The sky was so blue .The lake was so clear. Lugu lake always looks like a beautiful young woman.The lake has another name ——“women country”.Lu Gu lake is a mysterious place and there is a special national minority—MoSuo(摩梭族) . They have an amazing rite.young girls who are up to marriage open the doors of their rooms at night, and their lovers would climb up their windows, staying with them for the whole night and would leave the next morning and they never get married lawfully. Sometimes, some women have more than one lover so their children would never know who their father is.
That’s amazing! But the rite still exists in the nation.
This was a special trip for me because I travelled to really beautiful places and I had the chance of doing it by myself. It was an exciting and stimulating experience and I have got everything ready after this trip.
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