My favorite idols

hi,everyone.
Today I want to introduce my favorite idols to you all.My favorite idols are two people: one is named Victoria who came from China,she debuted in 2009 as the member of f(x).The another one is Nichkhun who came from Thailand,he debuted in 2008 as the member of 2PM.
The two people joined the program WE GOT MARRIED of Korea's MBC TV station on June 1st,2010.They became an imaginary couple named Khuntoria.They made me feel like I was falling in love,and I can't stop loving them.They have the ability to drive people crazy,and thousands of people are addicted to their Love.
I have never loved any idols like I love them,why do i love them so deeply?I think it's because of their spontaneous love.Although they were an imaginary couple,their body and eyes told us"We are truly falling in love".In my opinion,their love and care for each other made more and more people fall in love with them.I am just one of thousands of Khuntorians in the world.=]
If you watch their WE GOT MARRIED cut,you'll also love them like me,i promise!

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This is very good, I have never seen this show before, but you make me want to see it! 

Usually we dont say "make me crazy" we often say "drive me crazy" but really, i dont know why. Haha.

Most of your mistakes are tense and grammar mistakes which is very good. Most people can still understand through these mistakes, but better grammar makes you sound more fluent.