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Luck ? I had a tiny bit enthusiasm to start university, and I lost it today when I came across my highschool crush and his girlfriend who are going to study in the same department with me. Won't you believe it's just my luck? No, I wasn't looking forward to seeing him or anybody I knew. I thought it was going to be a new life, everyone said it was going to be a new life. It was something childish, of course I don't love him anymore, but when we are younger we have a bigger heart, and the pain we feel is equally big when it's broken. Maybe I should laugh at this but I'm so annoyed. Bleep.

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Luck ?

I had a tiny bit of enthusiasm to start university, and I lost it today when I came across my high school (two words) crush and his girlfriend who are going to study in the same department with me. Wouldn't you believe it's just my luck? No, I wasn't looking forward to seeing him or anybody I knew. I thought it was going to be a new life, everyone said it was going to be a new life.

 

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It was something childish, of course I don't love him anymore,

It was something childish, of course or

of course I don't love him anymore?

but when we are younger we have a bigger heart, and the pain we feel is equally big when it's broken.

Maybe I should laugh at this but I'm so annoyed. Bleep.

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dağ dağa kavuşmaz,insan insana kavuşur seda..:) People may always meet but mountains never
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It's a small world Seda, you never know who you're going to bump into next:))
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The only disharmony is the false notion of disharmony =)
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I thought the time I would be a student would be great. I would hang out with girls and drink beer, but the only things I got are studying every day and watching Batman.

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