Sazaesan Syndrome
Did you have a good weekend? Mine was quiet and good one. If only we didn't have this heat, it would be perfect!
Have you heard of " Sazaesan"? If you like Japanese anime, you would know it. It's a long-run cartoon which is aired every Sunday evening on TV. Many Japanese enjoy watching it. It is a story about a Japanese typical family( a bit archaic because they are big family which we seldom have in Japan). The lovely characters are popular among us. I also enjoy watching it sometimes.
But some of the viewers feel depressed after watching it. Why? Because after enjoying the program, we realize that Sunday is about to finish. Busy Monday is waiting for us...so we call this phenomenon "Sazaesan Syndrome".
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Sazaesan Syndrome
Mine was quiet and a good one. (adding an "a" sounds more natural)
The lovely characters are popular among us Japanese people. (This sentence is good as it is, but to improve it for the reader it might be better to specify who "us" is as it is could be confusing. Does "us" mean Japanese people, your friends, your family? Who is "us"? I still easily understand from the rest of the entry that you mean "Japanese people")
I also enjoy watching it sometimes. But some of the viewers feel depressed after watching it.-> I also enjoy watching it sometimes, but some of the viewers feel depressed after watching it. (I changed this because in proper written English you should never start a sentance with a prepostion like "But" or "And" as these are used to connect two statements within the same sentance. It is confusing because in spoken Engish we do it all the time! I hope that makes sense)
When writing "and" does not follow a comma, however "but" does require a comma:
-I like apple and bananas
-I like apples, but not bananas
I really enjoyed reading your entry! Your English is so good! The corrections I am making are how I correct students in English university! Way to go, very good job!
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