MOFUN LOFT
Mofun Loft is a beautiful cafe bar located in the acient city Suzhou. After graduated, I chose to have a work there. Because I love coffee and cocktails.
Life gave me a huge present there. I was cared of the friends around me . So when i was leaving, the sadness was full of heart.
Many things that I have learned there , and now i find i love coffee ,i love cocktails,and what's more ,I love mofun loft.
I will be back. please don't forget me i beg.
I love you.
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MOFUN LOFT
Mofun Loft is a beautiful cafe bar located in the ancient city Suzhou. After graduation, I chose to have a work there because I love coffee and cocktails.
Life gave me a huge present there. I was cared for by the friends around me, so when I was leaving, the sadness was heartfelt.
I have learned many things that there, and now I find I love coffee, I love cocktails, and what's more, I love Mofun Loft.
I will be back. Please don't forget me I beg.
I love you.
We would say "After graduation," or "After I graduated."
We would say "I chose to work there," or "I chose to have a job there."
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