My Little Pony( S1E2)

All the ponies got into a panic when they heard what Nightmare Moon said. Three ponies wanted to seize Nightmare Moon, but Nightmare Moon ran away. Twilight ran out of that library. At that night (It's okay to say at, but you don't have to) , Spike dreamt some horrible nightmares. Twilight placed the covers back on Spike, She thought Spike was a baby dragon after all, he should have a sweet dream. Twilight wanted to find out the Elements of Harmony. Finally, Pinkie Pie found out it (You have to either say "found it" or "found it out."). They knew only five elements were known, the sixth Elements of Harmony was complex and nobody knew it. They went to The Everfree Forest to get Elements of Harmony. Twilight told others she would face the difficulty by herself, but Applejack rejected her proposition. Applejack didn’t want to any friends to go into that creepy place alone. When they passed a cliff, they fall fell into it (fell is past tense!). Twilight grasped a corner of a cliff, Applejack told her to let go and she would be safe. Then Fluttershy and Rainbow held her. They met a Manticore, he stopped their way and looked angry (I think you want to say "he stopped them on their way and looked angry) . They used all their ways to let him go except Fluttershy, but Manticore was formidable. Flutter stopped them, she was kind to him, and helped him pull knife in his hand, Manticore become conversant (Conservant is not a word we use, maybe subservent?) to her. Pinkie Pie taught them to use their laugh to expel fear. Rarity shared her hair on her tail with a dragon as mustache, because he lost his mustache and he was sorrowful (sorrow is a noun, sourful is adj). Nightmare Moon tempted Rainbow to betray her friends and join Shadowbolts, but Rainbow rejected them at least. After they arrived at the old palace, they find Elements of Harmony and used it defeated Nightmare Moon together. The princess come back, Nightmare Moon regretted what she had done. They all forgave her, the princess and she controlled the country again. All ponies celebrated it.

(大人再看彩虹小马？ 那么丢脸！ 哈哈，写的不错，你用很多smart的词语 ，越来越地道的，越来越intellectual。词汇很好。 你应该专心THE这词语， 我不是老师所以我不太能解释，也许你的课本会教你什么时候用THE 这词语！）