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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi! I'm Sergio and I'm looking for practise my english with a native people because my future jobs requires it. I have a little level of english wroten and spoken, but the main matter for me is the bashfulness to speak because I have doubts with a lot of expresions and it makes me be slow and insecure when I'm speaking. My language is Neutral Spanish, i'm from Madrid (Spain) and I live in Alicante, a turistic place in the coast. I'm a passionate of the videogames but I have other hobbies like music, sports, DIY and all can be interesting to be learned. Thank you!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi!

I'm Sergio and I'm looking for practise my english with a native people because my future jobs requires it. I have a little level of english wroten and spoken, but the main matter for me is the bashfulness to speak because I have doubts with a lot of expresions and it makes me be slow and insecure when I'm speaking.

My language is Neutral Spanish, i'm from Madrid (Spain) and I live in Alicante, a turistic place in the coast.

I'm a passionate of the videogames but I have other hobbies like music, sports, DIY and all can be interesting to be learned.

Thank you!

 

I'm Sergio and I'm looking to practise my English with  native English speakers because my future jobs requires it. I have a basic knowledge of written and spoken English. My main concern is that I am afraid to speak because I am unsure of a lot of expressions which makes me slow and insecure when I'm speaking. 

 

My native language is Neutral Spanish. I'm from Madrid (Spain) but I live in Alicante which is a touristic place on the coast. 

 

I'm passionate about videogames but I have other interests and hobbies such as listening to music, playing sports and DIY. 

 

Well done!  I have left your post untouched and then made my corrections and changes below it so you can compare the differences.  Your original post was completely understandable but the grammar and context needed some improvement.  I hope that you can appreciate the difference a few changes make to improve the clarity of the post.  I look forward to reviewing more of your writings and hope to be able to speak with you soon.

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