First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My native language is Putonghua and I grew up in Anhui Province. I enjoy watching movies with my friends when I have free time.  My major is English, so it's important for me to practice and gain more knowledge about it.  Don't hesitate to correct me, practice makes perfect.

Good job.  By the way, in America most people don't know what "Putonghua" is, so it would probably be better just to say "Chinese" or "Mandarin."

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My native language is Putonghua and I grew up in Anhui province. I also watch movie with my friends whenever i am free. My major is English, It's important for me to practice English and know have more knowledges about it. (,helping me without hesitate, this sentence needs to be revise, it does not make a complete thought.) Practice makes perfect.