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An Old Thing
Today, I happened to find a PHS when I was packing the drawer. I don't know whether you (my foreign friends) know that it is something like a mobile phone. I used it when i was in primary school. I was quite naughty at that time. The PHS is very old now. Look at the picture.
How funny, Lu! I bought a phone something like that in China a few years ago. It was a Nokia and worked well during many trips I made throughout China. I do remember receiving some funny looks and giggles from a group of teenagers once while on a train ride from Shanghai to Suzhou.
Thanks for the essay. It would be possible to combine the last several sentences so they are not so choppy but I did not want to make too many changes.
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