Please correct my English essay.
subject: Write an essay in English about the following question. (about 100 words)
What do you expect from your university education?
my essay:
I expect 'how to spend happy life' from my university education. I am going to major businesses class. why? Because I have little money what I want to have and want to know how to save money. If I can save enough money, I can buy everything which I want and don't have to worry about my second life because I will be able employ people who take care of me.
Someone may say it is not happy life ,but I think this is just happy life.
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Actually I don't think so, but I have to write something...
So please don't guess me to be nasty guy.
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